Monday, July 27, 2009

Woman I am

Could you bye me a day in your life
Could you wear the clothes on my back
Could you mold me into what you desire

Mama says I’m beautiful just the way I am

But if that is so, why do you wish I was someone else?

Could you make me into everything you want
Could you be everything I want
Could you walk in my heels

Papa says I’m wonderful just the way I am

But if that is so, why do you wish I was something else?

4 comments:

  1. Lucci,
    This is a comment in general about your writing - I love it. Your poems speak from your heart, and your observations about life, and life as you have experienced it, ring so very true, and offer readers a new take on what you see. Keep it up.
    Nana
    http://villagerainbows.com

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  2. Thank you so very much Nana i really appreciate your comment.

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  3. Where did you learn to express yourself like that? I love it. Btw, check your spelling, ok? It takes away from the overall beauty.

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