Monday, November 9, 2009

Frist Love

Young and innocent, filled with fairy tales
Glazed eyed, I viewed the world
The sun shone brighter than before
And the stars twinkled in absolute awe

Crushes yes, but this, no! I had not a clue?
A tag at my heart, butterflies in my tummy
A song on my lips, day dreams unending
What was this feeling, I was feeling?

But the moment you winked at me
That second, your lids made contact
As I stood watching you say goodbye
I knew, I knew for sure, what it was.


  1. Nice poem. Suggestive and subtle, and not ruining the magic by direct telling.

  2. This is very good. The ending breaks my heart...

    Thanks for your comments on my blog.

  3. Oww... Did you ever tell him, this first love? Good job.

  4. I appreciate all your great comments Nana Yaw, thank you.

  5. You are most welcome, Myne, i'm one of your biggest fans. You inspire me.

  6. Thanks Maame lol, yes eventually it got round that :-)

  7. i miss that feeling! nice poem lucci.